Ei shohore neiko alo chander..
Tabu nion alo jholmoliye hase..
Ei shohore ful fote na r..
Ajke shohor baddo fyakase..
Ei shohore bhukha peter sari..
ei shohore marcedes er gari..
Ei shohore madhyarater nach..
Basantir aj payer talay kanch..
Ei shohore dushashoner hat..
Droupadira ekhono asohay...
Angelinar backless black top..
Prodip ghire andhakar chhoray..
Ei shohore brishti fonta ajo..
Ei shohore r kande na keu..
Ei shohore prokhr surjya ajo..
Ei shohore unnayaner dheu..
Ei shohore mukh fote sobbar..
Tabuo keno ghorer modhye ghor??
Ei shohore aloy andhakar..
Ei shohore Unnayaner jhor..
PAAP...............
15 years ago
9 comments:
besh bhalo likhechis...
tor lekha khb beshi pora hoyni je kota porechis osadharon
ei shohor ki sotti r sei sohor ache?
naki ei sohor ei sohori chilo
sondeho sotti jage.....
2to line add korlam...janina keno ichche holo hotath..
ei shohorer ushnotomo din,
sudhu mohiner ghorar kaje ase
ei sohorer neon alor niche,
bachcha jishu ajo muchki hase,,,
Hothat onek din bade bangla kobita porlam... Tao ajaana ek kobir lekha... Mon kharap hoe jae jakhon tomra chokhe angul die amader sahar take bar bar chenao.. amra baire theke amader chotobelar sahar take sopnil bhabar chesta kori sabsamay.. r tomra bar bar amader ghum vangie dao...
Tai eki sathe valo laga r mon kharap dutoi ajker raat take udas kore dilo....
Thank u aajker raat take onno rakam vaabna die vabanor jonno...
Thank u...
@Biman,
Mohiner ghorar kotha ar ki bolbo.. amader moto gadhar dolke jetuku manush korar, setuku to oi Moheener ghorapaloker dol tai shuru kore gechhe re...
@Prasun,
Apnar bhalo legechhe bole dhanyabad.. kharap legechhe boleo dhanyabad... asole tabu to ekbar bhebechhen kemon achhe amader shohorta etai satyi... Tabe amra to ajo asha harai na... Amar shohor bhalo achhe, thakbe... kakhono udasinota niye kakhono anyer bedanate pashe danriye.. abar kokhano shudhui bhese bhese jabe adorer nouka.....
Chelebelar amader sei bhalobasar sahorer kotha ro lekho... tomar kobitae ebar dekhte chai amader fele aasa tukro tukro purono bhalo lagar smrity gulokeo...
Bhalo theko..
Bhalo lekho..
I saw your comment in my blog. Thanks for that. However, I saw it much later. And yesterday made a new entry to the blog after a long time. If you have orkut account, add me. bye.
Tumi sotti e khub valo likheccho Asima Di....But aaj o amar kacche amar SOHOR ta sob theke priyo jodio apriyo onnek kicchu aaj k chole esecche amader so called gen X hip hop Kolkatar moddhe........Kintu aaj o jokhun Kolkatar Mati te prothom pa rakhi.....Sei anubhuti ta aaj o anubhav kori...Kintu amar Kolkata aaj sotti e Tantra,Music World,South City,Tank Top r low waist eer majhe nijer Oitirjhyo take kothay jano harea felecche........
Ei Sohor er aache Usnota
Sudhu aache Pran er ashhas
Ai sohor er Neon aalor nicche
Premik Premikka hath dhore bose.
Ai sohor er lal neel sonshar
Rongeen choshma pora manush jon
Ai sohor er aakhuno aache
Amar chotto belar priyo khon
Eta sompurno amar nijer baktobhyo............But I do appreciate ur witing always.It comes straight from your heart.
Hi Revee,
Tomar bhalo nam jani na, etatei sambodhan korlam. amar namtao sanshodhan kore nii ei sujoge, ami Asima noi ASMITA..
Er ageo ekta lekhate comment kroechhile tumi, ajkeo korechho, khub bhalo legechhe jano!
Asole blog likhe to ami protibari bigyapon kori, bondhuder dhore dhore porai, tai achena keu nije theke ese porle khub bhalo lage, r tar opor bhalo legechhe bolle to kothai nei. Tumio hoyto ei anubhuti ta bujhbe, abasya tumi khub serious meye, ami dekhechhi tomar blog.. se jakge.. comment ta prosonge asi..
Kolkata to tomar amar moto aneker kachhei khub priyo.. ta bole priyojoner jegulo apachhanda segulo likhbo na? tabe sob kichhur majhei to shohor take bhalobasi nijer moto kore..r bhalobasi bolei to benche achhi, bhalobasi bolei to sobbaike baran kori pothe ghate abarjana. chips r packet, badamer khosa felte, baran kori jekhane sekhane plastic felte.. R amra achhi bolei to benche achhe kolkata...
comment korte giye tumi nijei ekta kobita likhechho dekhlam, bhalo laglo eto sundar ekta lekha dekhe.. khub bhalo theko.. r bhalobaso nijer shohortake....
Dear Asmita Di....
Asima name e sambodhon korecchi bol e ami khoma prarthi.Amar tomar blogs sotti khub valo lage,R sob theke valo lage tumi Banglay e lekho....Amader bangla vasa e.And I m thankful to you that U liked mt those few lines which I added up in your poem.
Ai sutre ami ekta katha tomake boli...Ami ekdom e serious type er maye noi.Ami o tomar e moton..vishon aabegprobon.
And regarding adding me in your blogs,U r always welcome to do so.R sotti bolte ami sotti e tomar lekhar Fan.I would be highly obliged Asmita Di.
Khub valo theko
R khub khub valo lekho.
And jodi tomar kono Orkut e A/C thake,plz let me know that.
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