Tuesday, February 17, 2009

Mon Kharaper Korcha

Ajke brithai chesa kori lekhar
Hijibiji ankor katai day..
Ajke brithai ronge dobai tuli
Mon Kharap ki portray kora jay!!

Monkharaper rong hoy ki kono?
Dhusar? Sobuj othoba Sada-Kalo?
Monkharap ki shudhui kharap baje?
Monkharap ki ektuo noy bhalo??

Fagun haway mon kharapta urche elomelo..
Karan-khonja monta tar nai ba nagal pelo..
Ekla thakar ekla bhabar alas bikelbela
Eka ekai bhaste thake monkharaper chela..

Nijer monei chokh dubiye chosma pora monta
Kato rokom karan khonje;monkharaper mane..
Golokdhandhay jotoi ghuruk monkharaper khonje..
Ki je se khunje beray nijei ki ta jane???

9 comments:

Unknown said...

eto mon kharap kno ma tomar? fagun agun gaye legeche naki?

Asmita said...

Ke jane ki hoyechhe amar
Hoyto abar berechhe paglami..
Hoyto ami 'nobel' pabo bolei
Ichhedanay bhorechhi dustumi!!

Unknown said...

eita hoyeche jenu
bujhle monu....

Suman said...

ekhane to dekhchi chora kete comments korte hochhe... kintu amar to chondo ase na... ami emni i boli ki bolis?

kobita ta besh valo laglo... tobe tor mon kharap shune amar ta bere gelo... :(

Amitava said...

Jodio ami blog khub ekta follow kori na.. Kintu Kobita ta amar khub nijer mone hoyeche.. Asole Ghor theke onek dur e achi.. Kaj e korme etotai busy thaki je mon kharap ta bilasita hoye daray.. Kintu tobuo kokhno jodi nijer jonne kichuta somoy paoa jay, tokhon ghorer kotha, amar priyo sohor er kotha, purano bondhuder kotha, fele asa parar golir morer addar kotha bhison bhabe montake udas kore day.. Jani na.. Eto mon kharap kina.. kintu obosoi ekta alada onubhuti...

Asmita said...

@Amitava,
Dhanyabad apnake.. Amra jara likhi, ba kakhono kakhano anyer lekha pori, tara satyi kotota bujhi jani na, tabe jokhon keu ekta lekhar sathe ekatma bodh korte paren, setar theke anandadayak anubhuti bodhhoy lekhak ba pathak karor keui r kakhano pay na.. Ami amar lekhar jonye bondhuder theke gothonmulak samalochona peye thaki, tabe apnar anubhuti amake emon ekta purnotar swad dilo, jeta anya commentgulo hoyto sorboda dite pare na.. abar ekbar dhanyabad..

Ayan said...

Aaj O-balai kano mon amar.
Phale asa pother kinarai thomke darai.

Bhule jowa kon ganer koli phire ase
mon dhushor mon amar aber ronge bhase
potho hara kon pakhir dake batas apon potho harai.

Incognito..........Revee said...

Asima Di,

Tomar ai lekha ta sotti amar mon chuye galo.Onnek din por,mon er ato kaccher kicchu ekta spondon pelam tomar blog ta pore,jeta ekta onnorokum anubhuti dilo.College be school days er katha mone pore galo.Tution e jawa,Fuchka khawa,bondhu der love letter pora,kinba schooler senior dada der er sathe adda mara,School er cycle stan er adda,raga ragi,Prothom prem e anuvuti,kinba harmless flirting with senior guys in school,Durga pujo,Ma r boka boki,Baba r ador,Para r bondhu der sathe galpo,Ganga r dhare r prem kora kinba prem korte dekha,arthoheen hasi,adda,yearki,Colleger Professor der nea gossip,Film star der nea bitching,PNPC kora,Adult issue nea discuss kora......Sob kicchu ja korecchi last 22 bicchor e....Sob mone pore jay....Akhun carrier er jonno ami bari r theke dure,Bondhuder theke dure...Ai sob vebe sotti mon ta bicholoto hoye jay....Ato din eta e vabltam j Mon ta kharap hoye jay...Kintu ai blog ta porar por R "mon kharap" sobdho ta babohar korbo na....Akhun eta e bolbo Purono sriti r kotha bhebe aaj Mon ta aabegprobon hoye galo....But last e eta bolbo...tomar blog ta besh valo e laglo....Nijer sathe relate korte parlam...Purono sei son anuvuti k fire pelam...
Thank you Asima Di...

Unknown said...

mon kharap jinista oneker kachhei hoyto bilasitar moto jader satyi kono ovab bodh nei tadr kachhe eta nichhok-i paglami...kintu amr mone hoy amar moto onekei achhe jara ekhono virer mddhye eka hye jay hotat kre.jara poth cholte cholte khuje beray sothik thikana...meghla akas dkhle chhute chay akaser bisonnotake...